Saturday, March 2, 2013

“Peer Feedback for Revisions of First Draft of Paper One.

I found your paper a very good and interesting read. When you analyzed the quotes, it didn't sound like you were trying to force them into your paper; they flowed seamlessly in. I definitely enjoyed reading the background information, although I do have one suggestion. When you mention the eta class in the last paragraph, maybe you should define what kind of people that class consisted of. Very nice job, though.

Kaylan Bonnette

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